The Club Advisor Appears! | Snackgirls Original 01

AFTER SCHOOL · CLUBROOM

The Club Advisor Appears!

Red, Kirari, and Nea sit around snacks in their clubroom as the new advisor appears in the doorway. The English title says “Original 01: Club Advisor Arrives...?! What Now for Our Club?”
In four panels, Red offers a snack, Kirari photographs it with her pink heart phone case, Nea writes in her notebook, and an unfamiliar pair of shoes appears at the door. The English sound effects say “Ta-da!”, “Click!”, and “Dun!”

A few minutes before those footsteps, the three girls had been arguing over the first shot of their video.

In the clubroom at 5:30 p.m., Red introduces several snacks, Kirari lowers her pink heart-cased phone toward the table to take a photo, and Nea writes their activity plan.
After school, in the clubroom

After school, snack bags and scraps of paper were scattered across the Digital Media Research Club’s table. The three girls were about to try making a short video with a new editing app.

Red

This one goes first! Kirari, get a shot of it.

Kirari

Red, move your hand. You’re blocking the snack!

Nea

You two, we should decide what goes in the video before we start filming.

Nea went to write down the shot order, but the date on the activity plan caught her eye.

Nea

Huh? Our new club advisor is coming today?

Red

Today? How are we only noticing now?!

Kirari

Wait, Red! Put the snack bag down first!

Just as Kirari reached over to tap Red’s arm, heels clicked along the hallway. Everyone turned toward the door.

A two-panel comic shows the advisor's heels clicking down the hall, then a hand sliding open the clubroom door. The English sound effects read “Tap, tap” and “Slide.”
The club advisor stands in the doorway holding a folder; a dramatic “Dun—dun!” sound effect overlays the image.

The sliding door opened all the way. Red didn’t even have time to hide the snack bag behind her back.

Club Advisor

Hello. I’ll be the Digital Media Research Club’s advisor starting today. Were you filming something?

Red

Yes! The snacks are props!

Club Advisor

I hadn’t asked about those yet.

Kirari

Red, you brought them up yourself!

Red

Wait, more importantly—we didn’t know you were coming today.

Club Advisor

The principal gave you the room first, and they’ve only just assigned a teacher to the club. Surprised? Please, carry on with what you were doing.

Kirari

You’re not here to inspect what we’ve filmed, are you?

Club Advisor

I’m not here to inspect it. Tell me what you’re trying to make.

Red

There’s a new AI editing app that generates captions automatically. We want to make a thirty-second video about the snacks.

Club Advisor

Which parts does it handle automatically?

Kirari

It’s supposed to turn what we say into captions. We want to see how accurate it is, too.

Club Advisor

Then keep the automatic captions as well. It could be interesting to compare them with your corrected version.

Nea

Okay. I’ll record that. Here’s our activity plan, too.

Nea turned the plan toward her. The advisor’s finger stopped on one row.

In a comic scene, the advisor points to Nea's activity record while Red and Kirari exchange sheepish smiles.
Club Advisor

Hold on. Apart from filming, almost every task has Nea’s name on it.

Nea

I only put my name down for now. The three of us haven’t decided who’s doing what yet.

Red

Nea finished everything up last time, too. I’ll write the script this time.

Kirari

Shiro-chan, I’ll handle the editing and captions. I nearly stopped after taking the photos.

Club Advisor

Good. Then each of you should write your own name beside the task you’ll take on.

The three girls set the plan in the middle of the table and filled in their sections. Even after Red wrote her name, she kept her pen poised over the page.

Red

And I’m in charge of taste-testing!

Nea

Red, does eating the snacks really need its own role?

Club Advisor

It does if she records what they taste like.

Red

Hear that? Even the teacher agrees!

Kirari

Then write it down right after you eat, before you forget!

Nea

I’ll check the product names and work out the schedule. We can decide together when to post it.

Club Advisor

I’ll check where we’re allowed to film on school grounds.

The first draft

With the roles settled, Red began writing her lines. Kirari aimed her phone at the snacks, and Nea laid the activity plan beside them.

Red writes a description comparing the snacks, Kirari films with her pink heart-cased phone, Nea checks the activity record, and the advisor looks on.
Red

I wrote the first line. “Crunchy, then nice and salty.” What do you think?

Nea

I like it. But you’ve swapped the names of the first and second snacks.

Red

Oh, I missed that. I’ll fix it.

Once she’d corrected the snack names, Red read her line aloud. Kirari filmed the take and loaded it into the editing app.

Kirari

The automatic captions are ready! …Wait. It turned “nice and salty” into “now I’m salty”!

Red

Why would I be mad at a snack?!

Nea

I’ve saved the original. I’ll mark the mistake.

Kirari

Shiro-chan, I’ll fix the captions. Can you check the schedule?

Red

I’ve fixed the product names, too. I’ll read my line again.

Club Advisor

Sounds good. I’ll find out by tomorrow whether you can film in the hallway.

Red

Then we should put your job on the activity plan, too!

Nea

I’ll write it down.

Red

Wait, I’ll write the teacher’s job!

Kirari

Shiro-chan, put the pen down for a second. I’ll check it with Red!

Nea

…All right. I’ll tell you right away if anything’s wrong.

Red writes on the activity plan while Kirari checks it with her. Nea smiles comfortably over a mug, and the club advisor watches beside them.

Red, Kirari, and the advisor left the clubroom. Nea stayed by the window a little longer, looking at the table that had been so lively moments before.

Nea stands alone by the window of the quiet after-school clubroom, thinking back over the day.

Since the advisor arrived, it feels like our club has really begun. I wonder what we’ll try next. I can’t wait to find out.

SNACKGIRLS ORIGINAL · FIRST CLUB MEETING
That evening, the club advisor writes something on a document while pushing up her glasses with her other hand.
Even after everyone had gone home, the advisor spent a long time writing something on a document.What lies ahead for this club…?!

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